Sunday, 24 November 2013

Frankenstein Reading journal: Volume One


I am using the Penguin Classics edition for my chapter references. In some editions, the chapters are numbered differently, or wrongly, as I like to call it.
 
Letters: 

At the begging of the novel, there are four letters; all authored by the fictional Captain Robert Walton to his sister, Mrs Saville. The letters concern:


1.      Introducing Walton’s character as an explorer who is writing from St. Petersburg on his way to Archangel. This first letter also shows Walton’s obsessional characteristics such as his obsession with finding the mythical North Passage and deliberately enduring hardship such as “cold, famine, thirst and a want of sleep” in order to realise his dream, despite being a rich man who could have had a comfortable life. As we will see later, this mirrors Victor Frankenstein…
2.      Walton complains about his want of a friend and tells his sis about how great his First Lieutenant (LEF-TENANT, ‘K!?!) is. He also manages to sneak in a reference to, and afterwards, mention explicitly, the Rime of the Ancient Mariner. In Chapter 5, page 60, Frankenstein also quotes the Rime.
3.      The voyage has begun! Captain Walton is on his way to the North Pole. The “floating sheets of ice” are written about.  Walton has nothing significant to say, he’s just writing to say that he is successfully sailing.
4.      The longest letter by far: First the ship gets stuck in some ice, then we get our first description of the creature (“a being which had the shape of a man, but apparently of gigantic stature”), then we get our first description of Victor Frankenstein as he floats, “emaciated” on a sheet of ice in a sledge. He speaks with a “foreign accent” his limbs are “nearly frozen” and Walton says that “I never saw a man in so dreadful a condition” but Victor still feels the need to ask “wither are you bound” to him. This is the first time we see Victor and we get to witness his obsessional character up close and personal. There is no way that an emaciated man floating in the middle of the Arctic Ocean on an iceberg with just a sledge and one dog could make it after the Creation that he is chasing… This establishes the main character in the story as an obsessional romantic as he has sacrificed everything, including his health for the pursuit of his dream; catching up with his mistakes/the creature. After Frankenstein is introduced, Walton writes of his admiration for the man . It seems probable that he has found that friend he was complaining about not having in letter 2. The last thing to be established in letter 4 is that the rest of the story is going to be told to Ms Saville by Robert Walton using the words of Victor Frankenstein which have all, of course been written by Mary Shelley.

The point of this episological opening is to establish various themes that run like veins behind the tight yellow skin of the story. These include:
  •  Descriptions of nature in which it is a destructive force of evil (the opposite, but no less apparent theme of nature being a restorative is established in chapter one)
  • A general mood of romanticism, which is appropriate, considering this is a Gothic which is a sub-genre of romantic fiction.
  •  Ambition and obsession. These come across from both Walton, who has been obsessed with finding the Safe Passage since he was a child and Frankenstein, who would rather die than give up on his chase of the creature. Later in the volume, however, it becomes apparent that running away is a major theme, such as when Victor runs after he achieves his life's work; creating life and when he doesn't tell the judge that he believes his creation to have murdered William. Having only read volume one, I don't know if this is a theme yet, but fruitless ambition seems to be a vein through the book at this point, what with Walton trying to find the non-existent North Passage.
  • Frankenstein seems to love beautiful things and abhor ugly ones, as seen with his hatred of his creature, but also with his deification of Elizabeth
  • Both Walton and Frankenstein are in need of a friend. Just like when Frankenstein is nursed back to health by his buddy Clerval after two years of nocturnal loneliness and the creature after Victor runs away from him.
Chapter One:
  • Victor is described (by himself, no less,) as a "helpless creature", like the being which Frankenstein runs away from
  • Victor's parents have a "deep consciousness of what they owed towards the being to which they had given life" 35 (Victor himself, natch). If only Victor had had that same level of consciousness towards HIS being to which HE had given life and not ran away because it was ugly.
  • Elizabeth is said to be of "a different stock" to the poor family to which she was entrusted. This would have a Marxist interpreter fuming, as would the power that Victor's mother uses to have Elizabeth's carers hand her over to her just because she "wanted a daughter".
  • A Feminist reader, on the other hand would get their knickers in a twist over the way in which Elizabeth is described as a "pretty present" for Victor. A human: objectified. Victor is very much like this throughout the book, treating people as objects, as well as means to an end. This attitude would explain the abandonment of the creature, as Victor just thinks of him as a thing rather than a sentient life, capable of reason and emotion. Also, when at University, Victor neglects to correspond with his family and friend. When he needs them, he'll use them, but when he doesn't he can just forget about them, like an object.
Chapter Two:
  • "No human being could have had a happier childhood than myself" Sez Victor. Just a  shame about his adult life then... Also, this is what Walton said in his letters
  • Henry Clerval is introduced. He is Chivalrous and Romantic. Being chivalrous means not running away from any challenge, so that's kinda the opposite from our dear old Victor, but the Romantic element could very much apply to the protagonist, with his love for Elizabeth and study. See also for Romanticism: Walton.
  • Victor lives in a remote area with few people around. This could explain his lack of friends and his childish demeanour.
Chapter Three:
  • "The first misfortune of my life occurred-an omen, as it were, of my future misery". Poor old Frankenstein's mother dies after saving Elizabeth's life. On her deathbed, her dieing wish is that Victor and Elizabeth should get married. All of this happens just before Victor is due to start University, that poor guy...
  • And when he does start University, he is told that "You have burdened your memory with exploded systems and useless names" by Krempe.
Chapter Four:
  • Victor works out how to create life!
  • He has a romantic obsession with the origin of life.
  • Destructive nature, Victor's emotions are a "Hurricane"!
  • "I shunned my fellow creatures as if I had been guilty of some crime" such as collecting body parts under the cover of darkness?
Chapter Five:
  • "It was a dreary night in November". This is how chapter five starts. Originally Ms Shelley planned the story to start like this. It creates a feeling that this isn't going to end well. Also, the fact that it is set at one in the morning helps to set the scene too.
  • The creature is referred to as "the accomplishment of my toils" by Victor
  • Victor calls the creature a "wretch". Quick turnabout...
  • When the creature moves, "The beauty of the dream vanished"...
  • Victor dreams about Elizabeth who then turns into his mum's corpse. Psychoanalysis wasn't around in 1818 when the book was written, but the fact that it was written shows that this dream is somehow significant. Love will turn to grief? Now that he has lost the love of his dream to create life, he has to grieve about the consequences? Or is it that you can't hide from your own grief? Whatever it is, "the dreams that had been my food and pleasant rest for so long a space were now to become a hell for me"
  • Victor calls the creature "the miserable monster". It is, after all, a "demonical corpse to which I had so miserably given life". In chapter one, Victor says of his parents that they had the "future lot" of their child to "direct to happiness or misery, according to how they fulfilled their duties". It would seem that Victor didn't fulfil his duties to his creation...
  • Victor just wants to go to sleep to forget about THE BIGGEST MOMENT IN NATURAL PHILOSOPHY EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Life is created, but Victor thinks it's ugly, and so runs away.
  • The creature is "A thing as even Dante could not of conceived". This is a slight overreaction, lets be honest
  • Frankenstein doesn't tell anybody about the creature. This shows a large degree of irresponsibility, as it could hurt someone! 
Chapter Six
  • Letter. Sent by Elizabeth to Victor, imploring him to write to his family... Also introduces Justine as a character.
  • Victor goes for a walking tour up a mountain. Running away from the creature again!
  • Clerval is a good friend of Victor! Nurses Frankenstein back to health!
  • Ends on the ironic note of Victor be in in spirits of "unbridled joy and hilarity". His Bro, William has probably already been murdered at this point by the life he created and abandoned.
Chapter Seven:
  • Letter tells Victor that William has been murdered and the necklace he was wearing with a picture of his mum on stolen. Elizabeth blames herself for allowing him to wear the necklace... The necklace is found in the possession of Justine, who, for some reason, makes a false confession to the charges. Victor KNOWS the creature is to blame after seeing him in the vicinity, but he can't prove it...
Chapter Eight:
  •  Justine is executed after Victors appeal is revoked... There is no evidence to back up the appeal and Justine has confessed. Victor says nothing about his creation.
  • Does he feel ashamed that he made something so hideous and so is unable to admit to it even with the threat of death for a family servant/friend... What a selfish so-and-so.
  • Or is that he wants to protect his creation, if only on a subconscious level, from harm. THERE IS NO EVIDENCE OF THIS!
What is Frankenstein about at the end of volume one?:
Good question! It could be about not taking responsibility for your actions or the perils of playing God... The church of Ingolstat is seen by Victor as he enters the University town and after he abandons the creature. Is the white of the church meant to represent or is it that the Church is good or something.

Saturday, 2 November 2013

MacBeth reading journal: Act Five

Scene One:

  • Enter a Doctor physic and a waiting gentlewoman (Lady MacBeth's gentlewoman)
  • 5 - Lady MacBeth sleepwalks and while sleeping she has been seen to 6- "take forth paper, fold it, write upon't, read it afterwards seal it and again return to bed" says the gentlewoman about Lady MacBeth. Lady MacBeth could be writing a confession to her and her husband's crimes.
  • 22 - Lady LacBeth has a light by her "continually". Is she afraid of the the unknown?
  • 27 - Lady MacBeth rubs her hands 29- "washing her hands". Like Pontius Pilate in the Bible washing his hands after he authorised the execution of Jesus. 
  • 34 - "Out damned spot! Out, I say!" Lady MacBeth. 38- "who would have thought the old man to have so much blood in him?" Lady MacBeth is going mad and thinks she sees Duncan's blood on her hand physically still in her dreams rather than just metaphorically.
  • 62 - "There's a knocking at the gate" Lady MacBeth still remembers the knocking on the gate that happened after the murder. It was caused by MacDuff, the man who in Act Four Scene Three vows to kill MacBeth. Significant or what?
  • 64 - "What's done cannot be undone" says Lady MacBeth. Earlier, after the murder of Duncan, her character said that "what's done is done". Shakespeare is now making her sound more negative.
  • Blood is a symbol of Lady MacBeth's guilt she feels.
  • This is the first scene in the play that Lady MacBeth speaks in bland verse! She has changed!
Gothic elements of Scene One:

  • The supernatural: (Now known to be a natural phenomenon, but in Elizabethan times sleepwalking was seen as supernatural and not right)
  • Psychological torment: (This scene lays it on thick. Really thick. Poor Lady MacBeth... It's obvious to the audience that her character is racked with guilt and deeply troubled)
  • The Past: (Lady MacBeth just can't escape from it's long and bloody shadow)
  • Darkness and Light - Symbolised: (Lady MacBeth always has a torch with her. Presumably because she is afraid of the unknown [the darkness which the torch cuts through])
  • Fear: (And how! Lady MacBeth is having a nightmare about her bloody hands and is afraid of the knocking on the gate that happened on night of the crime. Also, the gentlewoman and Doctor are afraid to hear from the horse's mouth as it were about Duncan's murder)
Scene Two:

  • A scene with MacBeth's enemies in England
  • 6 - "Birnan wood" is meantioned as a meeting place of MacBeth's enemies. The same Birnan wood that the third apparition told MacBeth would move when MacBeth would be defeated
  • 13 - "Some say he's mad" Cathness about MacBeth. Lady MacBeth is mad...
  • 17 - "His secret murders sticking on his hands" like the blood on Lady MacBeth's hands...
  • 19/20 - "Those he commands move only in command, nothing in love" Angus about MacBeth. Nobody is loyal to MacBeth, they just fear for their lives
Gothic elements in Scene Two:

  • Fear: (MacBeth's army fears him and only acts if they are commanded, never out of love for king or country)
Scene Three:

  • 6 - MacBeth exactly quotes the witches prophecy showing that he hasn't stopped thinking about it...
  • MacBeth is clearly mad or delusional. He is going to fight a battle against a 10,000 strong coalition army of English and Scotish soldiers with his force of people who don't believe in him.
  • 11 - MacBeth calls his own servant a "cream-faced loon"
  • 15 - "lilly-livered boy" MacBeth is completely dominant over other characters. What a bad guy...
  • There are lots of references to the colour white, as if everything in this act is going to come clean
  • 24 - MacBeth references his old age
  • 36 - MacBeth puts his armour on hours before he needs to. This shows that he is more afraid than he is showing on the outside. Is he noble (defending his country), pathetic (imagine waiting around your castle in armour for hours before you need to wear it) or does he simply feel vulnerable
  • 37 - MacBeth calls his ill wife "your patient" when talking to the doctor
  • 39 - When MacBeth is told that Lady MacBeth's mind is "diseased" with a "rooted sorrow" by the doctor, MacBeth says in characteristically unsympathetic way "cure her of that" he thinks that the doctor can just cast a spell and his wife will be cured, like the witches could.
  • 45/46 - "Therein the patient must minister to himself" The doctor referring to MacBeth. Almost as if the doctor were saying if lady MacBeth is ill, then so are you, MacBeth. This is an astonishingly brave thing to say
Gothic elements in Scene Three:

  • The supernatural: (MacBeth talks to the doctor as if he were a witch)
Scene Four:

  • 8 - MacBeth is called a "confident tyrant" by Seyward, but is that true? Is MacBeth really confident? He put on his armour hours before the attack was expected...
Scene Five:

  • 9 - "I have almost forgot the taste of fears" MacBeth has lost all feelings
  • 16 - "The Queen, my lord, is dead". The one person who truly stood by MacBeth committed suicide
  • 17 - "She should have died hereafter" Everyone is going to die eventually. "Memento Mori"
  • 23 - "out, out brief candle!" A metaphor for life, but also Lady MacBeth was carrying a candle earlier in the play...
  • 26 - Life is a "tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing". That MacBeth is really down in the dumps! This speech is significant because it might be MacBeth attempting to justify his killings to himself. Nice try, loser! It is also very nihilistic
  • 35 - "Birnan...began to move" says the messenger. The witch's apparition's prophecies are coming true!
Scene Six:

  • 108 - MacBeth is described as a "butcher". Fair enough. However, Lady MacBeth is described as a "fiend-like queen" this is unfair.
  • There is a definite parallel between MacBeth's head being chopped off and the description of him unzipping his enemy at the beginning of the play. Violence begets violence; you reap what you sew ect... This is used by Shakespeare to show that nothing has changed. The new king has murdered the old, just as has happened for centuries before hand and will continue for centuries afterwards. Watch your back Malcolm, you're next!

MacBeth reading journal: Act Four

Scene One:
  • Begins with the three witches saying a spell. There are four stresses in each line, but only seven sy-lla-bles ("DOUble, DOUble, TOIL and TROUble"-10), meaning that they must be speaking in "trochaic tetrameter". They also speak this way in Act One Scene One, but not in Act Three Scene Five where they are being told off for acting without Hecat's say so. I hadn't noticed this before, so thanks http://www.shakespeare-online.com/plays/macbeth/macbethfaq/witchmetre.html!
  •  The weird sisters chant about mixing body parts together in their cauldron. Very unpleasant. None of the parts are from birds (birds are somehow significant in the play).
  • 45 - "Something wicked this way comes". Second Witch talking about MacBeth. This objectifies MacBeth and by taking away his humanity by not calling him "someone", it makes him look more evil to the audience. It allows the audience to see MacBeth for what he really is: a tyranical king. Before the audience would been willing to overlook the murders as they felt emotionally connected to the great war hero who had been lead astrey by the women in his life, but when one of those women suddenly refers to him as an it, the audience's emotional attachment should disappear and they should be able to see that "something" for what it really is. Not a poor man who was manipulated from the shadows by supernatural beings (and his wife who wanders around the castle at night like a ghost, sleepwalking) but a man who has murdered the King and his best friend just to gain and hold on to power, despite being one of the most powerful men in the country anyway. He could have ignored the Weird sisters and Lady MacBeth, but he didn't because inside, he desired power.
  • After 67 - The Witches conjour up an Armed head which tells MacBeth in line 70 to "beware MacDuff". MacBeth isn't too impressed with an armed head (shouldn't he be surprised by this?) telling him to beware MacDuff though and says so in line 73 "Thou hast harped my fear aright". He knew that already!
  • After 75 - The Witches summon a Bloody child who tells MacBeth that "none of woman born shall harm MacBeth" This would make MacBeth feel invincible, as surely all humans are woman born.
  • 83 - "Thou shalt not live" MacBeth about MacDuff. Why does he want him dead if he has nothing to fear from him. This is Shakespeare making doubly sure that the audience do not like MacBeth. He now murders friends for no reason
  • After 85 - The witches bring forth a child crowned with a tree in his hand. This guy says that "MacBeth shall never vanquished be, until Great Birnan Wood to high Dunsinane Hill shall come against him". MacBeth is invulnerable until a forest walks up a hill
  • 86 - MacBeth is frightened by the third apparition because it has a crown, which he sees as a threat to his rule.
  • After 110 - MacBeth is treated to a show of eight kings and Banquo who is the last of the eight and is holding a mirror showing many more kings
  • 111 to 123 - MacBeth is concerned. We can tell this from the fact that he stops rhyming and speaking in rhythm.
  • 141 - MacBeth and the audience learn that MacDuff hath fled to England from Lennox
  • 149 - "The castle of MacDuff I will surprise" and "give to the edge o' the sword his wife, his babes and all unfortunate souls that trace him in his line" sez MacBeth. This is Shakespeare making trebly sure that the audience don't have any sympathy left for the tyrant MacBeth. It is interesting to note that MacBeth says this all with Lennox still on stage. This could show that MacBeth feels completely invincible.
Gothic elements in Scene One:
  • Fear: (MacBeth is afraid of the crowned child and the line of eight kings because he sees them as a threat to his authority)
  • The supernatural: (The Weird sisters make a potion, summon three apparitions and eight shadowy kings before vanishing)
 Scene Two:
  • Enter Macduff's wife, her son and Ross. No sooner has MacBeth decided to murder MacDuffs family than we see that very slaughter... This play has pace. It's a slippery slope of destruction that will only end badly for everybody involved.
  • MacDuff's wife and son don't have names in the script, seeming to imply that they are MacDuff's possessions or something.
  • 1 - MacDuff's wife asks Ross "What had he (?) done to make him (MacDuff) FLY the land"! Birds fly...
  • 9 - "for the poor wren, the most diminutive of birds, will fight, her young ones in her nest, against the owl". Earlier in the play, Shakespeare informs us of an owl killing a falcon after MacBeth kills Duncan. This is the second time that MacBeth has been refered to as an owl.
  • 35 - Son calls himself a bird
  • 46 - Wife calls MacDuff a traitor.
  • 65 - Messenger tells Wife to run away.
 Gothic elements in Scene Two:
  • Fear: (when the murderers enter)
  • Weak female character [pretty much the only one in the play]: (Wife, although she does stand up to the murderers)
Scene Three:
  • Malcom and MacDuff meet up in England
  • 12-13 - "This tyrant, whose sole name blisters our tongues, was once thought honest; you have loved him well" Malcom on MacBeth"
  • We see MacDuff's reaction to his family and servant's slaughter. It might just be a modern thing, but I, personally, think that Malcom is extremely insensitive to his friend's utter dismay, telling MacDuff to take the murder of all his loved ones "like a man". If this is not just a modern thought, then it could be Shakespeare trying to show us that Malcom won't be a very nice new king when he is crowned as he is obviously only using MacDuff. When slaying monsters one must be careful to not become a monster oneself.